I think this section has been written three different times. Still, it was the one thing I knew was on my list (though the reason why has long been lost to the Unwritten Annals of Time) to complete when we started the Wondrous Wiarton Writing Retreat, so that’s what I did! And here it is for you, dear reader, to peruse and enjoy. It was a good way to ease into the week. It had been awhile since I gave ye olde Creative Writing juices a good go, and this set me up for a positively effective week.
The final section! Interestingly, this is the section where I stuck closest to the original outline, and it’s also the section where I came closest to 1500 words (1482, to be exact). I don’t think that’s a coincidence. I think the formula works, you’ve just got to be very dedicated to following it.
We’re in the home stretch, folks!1 Here’s the plot for the final 1500 words. I found my way back to the original plot somewhere along the line and this is actually pretty accurate to what’s on the page.
As always, I would appreciate it if you read the story section before this section.1As always, this is entirely unedited except to turn my words red and Mr. Dent’s black.
If you’re following along with the story, you’ll note that I’m INCREDIBLY off-track here. Like, I’m barely even close.
but you do you, my friend↩
Now for the third 1500 words! I admit, I thought this was finished and that I had just forgotten to post it, but there was a whole chunk missing that just said “tdk figure this out later”. I guess I just forgot to finish it? MY BAD. If you click through to the master plot for this section, you’ll see just how badly I deviated from it.
Regardless, this section is actually only 1300 words long, even with the bit that I figured out today. So far I’m actually on track for Mr. Dent’s suggested word count, even with the too-long first half.
Continue reading “The Yarn: Section 3”
Here’s the second 1500 words (… 1650. I did my best, I swear!). The first 1500 can be found here, and the outline for this section is here. Careful readers will note that I shifted some things from the end of section 1 to the beginning of section 2. I’m still not convinced that this section works as well as I want it to, but it sure was fun to write.
Interestingly 2, this time around I really want to go back and re-write this section of the story. It hews more closely to the original outline, but re-reading the outline I’ve realized just how much of the actual formula I missed–the beats and character choices that are key to Dent’s formula that I laid out here, then dropped when it came to actually writing the story.
Here’s the first 1500 words as suggested by Lester Dent. It’s more like 1600 words, but that’s better than draft one’s 3000 words. So where did the last 1000 go? I tried to cut things down word-by-word (superfluous “that”s, “she said”s that were explained by the text), but even I’m not that purple. Continue reading “The Yarn: Section 1”
Here’s where I plotted out the first 1500 words. Of course, I would prefer it if you read those 1500 (…ish) words before you read this mess, but I ain’t the boss of you. I’ve copied Mr. Dent’s outline here, using it as a form of sorts. His words are in black, mine are in red.
And here comes two! I didn’t actually write this section in November, but it looks like it was the first I tackled in December (the whole two months kind of flew by in a blur). This is not my first time writing Vilnius, however, it’s my first time getting inside his head. I may have mentioned during that first section (it was while the party raged on) that I was quite proud of my characterization of Vilnius when he tried to convert Charlotte. In this section, I smiled at a handful of Vilnius moments, but as James pointed out (either in a note, or perhaps over Skype) my first go round the bend was best so far. There’s a lot of work to be done still here, but I’m quite okay with it. I feel like, by testing Vilnius’ back and forths, I probably learned more than if I had just “got it”. And the guy managed to surprise me: he’s super clever, but he ain’t no Xanatos. He’s got plans, but he doesn’t see it all coming. What he does know, however, is how to roll with it…